Camp recount
It was Monday the 26th may 2010 we were waiting for our boat . Our boat finaly got here and we hoped on and of then took a 6k walk very sore and painful it was mostly up hill we got to camp listenend to the rules and got settled in. We did our first activity we did orentering it was boring because just walked around than we went sailing had dinner did our night activity than went to bed.
. The next day we woke up early, had breakfast and went to our first 2 activities had something to eat than went to our next 2 activities had dinner did our night activitys than went to sleep.
. The next day was basictly the same on thurs day we had electives I did kayaking and 2 movies and spme free time got ready for dinner and had a camp concert than went to bed .
the next day we packed up and walked back to our boat and went home.
you spelled some wrong its some not spme and it could have been longer
ReplyDeleteHey Caleb, I am a bit disappointed with the amount of effort you put into your recount. It does give info but very little and there is hardly any writing. It's like going to a restaurant and asking for a medium steak and getting a small one instead... you know what I mean?Well anyway you had a few spelling mistakes and I reckon there could of been more writing...
ReplyDeleteGrace
You should have put more detail into it and it could have been longer
ReplyDeleteHi caleb sorry but i have to agree with grace because it didn't look like you put that much effort into it and you skipped lots of stuff like what we had for dinner and you also missed out on most of the activitys. It was good but could have been a lot better. It is cool though.
ReplyDeleteConnor